Imma Live My Life Comments

i love this line brittney like rain washes away tears

The essence of this poem is up lifting and honest. Your style is the raw honestly you convey the reader especially to youth. I can feel every pain, sorrow, anger and enlightenment each of your poems... but i like this one..as i sense (though i could be wrong) .. resolution in it.. about yourself..and the future. Keep the brillant flow of emotions into words going.. the more stark truth, raw emotion and truth so creatively written leaves the greatest impression on someone.. an impression that some times is life changing! Remember to firstly write for yourself, well done, Mel xx

I like the flow in this one...keep it up