Monday, June 23, 2014

Imitation Love Comments

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I don't want your imitation,
I want bold and true,
This pale remainder,
Of what you have given,
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Jess Terry
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Roseann Shawiak 28 June 2014

Good expression of underlying anger, in finding someone's love was just an imitation love - a lie. Thank you for sharing. I really enjoy your style of writing. Keep up the intensity of your poetry it resounds through my mind, I look forward to reading more. RoseAnn

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