Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Imagining My Love Comments

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As I sight the flowers blooming under sun
This breathtaking moment seems full of fun

The smile they expose nourishe my love
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Dr Mohammed Younis Dar
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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2017

Lovely poem. A narrative devoted to love and the lovers' commitment to live together. Thanks. I spoke my heart out, she remained quiet Believing my words and thinking them right Her eyes that moment had volumes to tell With emotional outbursts she wanted to yell

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Unwritten Soul 08 August 2017

Honest, Beautiful, Sincere and heartfelt poem, i know when you write this lot of things come to your mind that telling your pen how it going to chain the words on the paper, the result is amazing, keep it up...

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THANK YOU VERY MUCH FRIEND!

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Dar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Thanks, sure I 'll read it.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 August 2017

destiny matych sing, good one

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Dr Mohammed Younis Dar

Dr Mohammed Younis Dar

Kashmir valley
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