Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Imagining Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Think of a doorway opening to paradise
Softly unlocked by a tender kiss.
Imagine the passion love will then fashion
From eager hearts climbing this stairway to bliss.
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Bob Gibson 14 October 2008

A Breathtaking poem, Fay! you leave me gobsmacked! for those that have never been in love! my heart reaches out to you! love, the most powerful emotion of life,

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Ian Bowen 03 October 2008

Fay, lovely gentle piece of work.10/10 Ian

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Kathleen West 01 October 2008

I love it! Love is the one constant in our lives, it is beautiful in any form it takes, as you expressed so well.

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Susan Jarvis 01 October 2008

Fay, this is simply beautiful. For subject, sentiment and form you deserve a 10. S :)

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Tom Balch 01 October 2008

A lovely flowing, well penned piece Fay, , Tom

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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