Monday, June 30, 2008

Imagined Love Comments

Rating: 4.8

You can find imagined love
Right there between the lines.
It's surely there, the love we see,
The one our heart designs.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
COMMENTS
Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

nicely creative, very brilliant write. always ieaves me touched and intrigued.

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Corey Campbell (BlackChild) 24 February 2009

Once again... greatly written! I enjoy reading your poems.

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Bertrina Shorter 09 February 2009

very beautiful and i loved it romantic touch of a well seasoned love relationship

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Ana Zaldivar 07 February 2009

Nice flow, lovely poem.. I love it... it really got me realaxed.. and the use of words.. unique. best wishes, ana

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Okami Kamikaze 28 January 2009

Every word means so much here. I would dare compare you to Poe-my favorite poet- because each verse flows into the next. I could use this to describe my life and that's why I appreciate it enough to compare you to Poe. My mother says, 'Poems can come from the mind, but works of art come from the heart'. And that is what your poem is, a work of art.

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Jose Murguia 19 January 2009

mr 1962 your poems just get better with time....

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Asha Roberts 01 October 2008

the flow in this poem made it easy to read, but the depth in it is unspeakable.

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Catherine Lindsey 12 September 2008

So many people get caught in this trap. I think it is the nature of poetry to pull on heartstrings, we just need to keep our heads on straight. Take care, and Thank you for reading my poetry, I'll be back soon to read more of yours. Catie :)

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Yazmin Rosario 10 September 2008

Written wonderfully, the last stanza is so sincere and true. Your an amazing poet indeed.

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samar Halabi 05 September 2008

Great one.. You write a wonderful poems about love... no thing more to tell but really great thanks a lot

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Krystal Alley 02 September 2008

your right...you can never change love......you are still my inspration in writing poems....i just wanna tell you something...me being 18 yrs old and writing poems about love and all that stuff, well i can tell you that you beat me in that subject.....whenever i read your poems..i wanna write more and more about love....thank you so much w/love krystal

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Aryn James 01 September 2008

this is a lovely poem, it flows so nicely. also thank you for reading my poems. much thanks. -aryn

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Dr. Ram Sharma 31 August 2008

a very good poem, send some of your creations at my home address for review

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Pandora Chaos 27 August 2008

this poem is awsome dad......

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Anna jonson 23 August 2008

waaaaaaaaaaw to find imagined love is what most people are deaming for

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Marla Byeuttif 11 August 2008

Very good. Reminds me of a mistake I made once...

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Ying Escalona 14 July 2008

imagined love...prisoner of love...that is me Greenwolf...and I just can't disagree with you...'until we give it a life'...wow.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 July 2008

This is cool imaginative poem, nice to read.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 July 2008

Finely written no doubt.....thoughtfull composition. 10/10

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Kija Ajik 08 July 2008

Wow that was very good, I can somewhat relate to that. Rate 9!

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