Friday, November 7, 2008

Imagination Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fallen trees cover

a cave or magic portal
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 November 2008

A beautiful Haiku....Full of suspense and meanings....Very fresh as well.

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Mark Nwagwu 08 November 2008

LMGB, loved the rhythm in your name. Your poem appears just below mine, For Obama Transition, on p, age 17 of list of poems, at this time. And so I'll dare; I'll enter for it's a magic portal, with huge African drums guarding the cave, music playing, spirits prancing, and gamely humans dance their delight to lights unseen. This is a great write, LMGB, provacative and deeply insightful. Mark

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Sathyanarayana M V S 07 November 2008

Strikingly beautiful haiku......10

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