Saturday, August 25, 2012

Imagination Comments

Rating: 4.9

O step into a wondrous world
Where visions beautiful are hurled
As through imagination`s play
All thoughts then drift so far away
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Valerie Dohren
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James Casey 29 August 2012

Thanks Val you have described our crazy minds to a tee, for if if weren't for the imaginations of poets like you, our world would most certainly be a dull place............

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 August 2012

Imagination well described in this finely woven poem with vivid images that leap out in words and lines.

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Danny Draper 27 August 2012

A beautiful celebration of and for imagination woven with some choice descriptions and inspiring imagery and emotions.

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Valsa George 27 August 2012

I am sure you are now in a euphoric land of imagination! Where is that bright empyreal place veiled? You leave us to drift in wishful longing for such a place! !

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Ken E Hall 27 August 2012

Nice to read imagination and dreams without them we have nothing, your second verse fits my fantasy of dancing which I do 3 times a week...dreams laid bare with music...thanks for this...regards

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Captain Cur 26 August 2012

A stupendous visionary write. Imagination is our guide.

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Unwritten Soul 25 August 2012

Lovely! ! when imagination takes place we can color anything and arrange impossible to anywhere we wanted, lovely write as always Valerie_Unwritten Soul

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Mark Normand 25 August 2012

An elegant poem that flows smoothly while painting a picture of the sublime world we all let our minds drift away to when we are overcome by boredom and we need to smile.Good job.

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Dave Walker 25 August 2012

The dream world can be a wonderful place. A fantastic poem.

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Smoky Hoss 25 August 2012

Seems to be more than one beautiful meaning flowing sweetly through this wonderful poem. A dream, a hope, a spirit, ... a destination.

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Segun Johnson Ozique 25 August 2012

'Behind reality`s dark face Is veiled a bright empyreal place Where fantasies are captured'...mmm, beautifully written. Imagine that; reality and wish, side by side.

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Heather Wilson 25 August 2012

Imagination, where would we be without it? , so well described, a lovely poem Val.

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Elna Nel 25 August 2012

a beautiful journey, this poem!

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Eric Cockrell 25 August 2012

are we then the dreamer, or the dream? well done!

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