Monday, June 1, 2015

Imagination Comments

Rating: 4.9

I know someone who never knew me,
I know when she goes to bed,
And when she awakens in the morning,
I know how she stands before a mirror,
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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2015

A meaningful and a nice composition

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 June 2015

A palatable poem I like most. Nicely composed. Enjoyed. ....10

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Valsa George 03 June 2015

If she doesn’t come in the poet’s dreams, The poet will lose all his worth, The inspirational wealth, Yes, unless the poet has close association with Imagination, he cannot fare as a poet! I must say that you have lots of it! Enjoyed the poem

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 June 2015

You are keep us all in suspense. She in your poem is blessed with bountiful beauty that hold someone closer to your poems. Really enjoyed the beautiful poem and its flow of words. Loved reading it.

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Bisma Mirza 02 June 2015

Beautiful poem....... cool! ! ! 10 on 10

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Enjoyed this, Akhtar...The poem you posted before that I am assuming may ne in your native tongue...Was that Kasmiri? I'm not too familiar with linguistics outside of, English, Italian, Latin and Gaelic....Good work here! ~FjR~

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2015

I write poems in Urdu, my previous Urdu poem is not about Kashmir or Kashmiri.

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Khalid Saifullah 01 June 2015

A nice poem..........................10

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