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Like a gondola of green scented fruits
Drifting along the dark canals of Venice,
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Exquisite portrayal of nature and how it relates to the feelings of a man. Matchless. Thanks.
Simply awesome. The journey of love is fantastic here. Each stanza is a gem in itself. Thanks for sharing and Congrats.
So does my heart fill slowly with tears, Until you return..... this is the essence of the poem. Beautifully crafted.
So does my heart fill slowly with tears, Until you return. A great ode to past memories. 10+
oh, beautiful images abound herein! ! Love that moves like a gondola, , , a beech tree shuddering its leaves.....swirling clouds of birds vanishing..... on and on this lovely poem goes
The flower which the wind has shaken Is soon filled again with rain; So does my heart fill slowly with tears, Until you return. My heart fills with joy to read this lovely poem