Images In The Dark Comments

I will not vote any # of stars at this time; 'the jury is still out'. bri : ) IF PH had deactivated this poem, as anais told me, it certainly is in place at this moment. bri : )

'The problem of distinguishing between further and farther is compounded by the fact that each of these words can be an adverb, adjective, or a verb, and has multiple meanings in some of these parts of speech.'

another alliteration (I think it's ok there is a break in the allitertion) : 'detonating with death' Do you 'see' ghostly images of 'departed friends'? ?

I like the alliteration here: 'devouring dance of energy.' I THINK part of your poem is fiction. Am I correct?