Thursday, May 29, 2008

Images In The Afterglow * * * Comments

Rating: 4.5

I feel as rich as Croesus
while watching gold of day
dispel amid white cypress;
its final sheen's display.
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Gregory Wm. Gunn
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 October 2021

Discourteous blackbirds continue to make a fuss our exchange of words, decline and fall to dust.......magnificently said.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 November 2015

The crystalline orb of night hallucinogenically hangs above the smoky pines....wrought marvelously by the vivid imagery, thanks for sharing

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Bianca J. Walker 23 June 2008

This was beautiful imagery. Made me invision a midsummer's night's dream.

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Scarlett Treat 12 June 2008

Beauty and harmony combined to bring peace and happiness, tranquility. I love the 'feel' of this poem, simply because it makes me happy. I love this time of day, just before night starts to stalk us! !

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Tailor Bell 12 June 2008

a marvelously vivid scene seems to effortlessly appear from your stanzas. hypnotically draws you in. masterful work, Greg. -Tailor

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Greg, this is so eruditely flowing that one almost has to actually look at the page to see the subtle rhyme. Hat off once again, sire... t x

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Gregory Wm. Gunn

Gregory Wm. Gunn

Windsor, On., Canada
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