Some unsaid
To be alive I do not need a life
Gift me a few of your smiles
Paint me and my moments with your touches
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Really nice poem. I love your writing style. I dare to compare it with T. S. Eliot's writing style. Keep it up.
The desire of the moth for the star.The night for the morrow. Your earnest desire for your ladylove is expressed beautifully. A romantic poet you are. Nice poem.
your last stanza is touching. somehow I know from the winds you are not going to be mine. this is a sweet write