At the break of dawn each day
when I awake
my eyes invariably stray
to that niche in the wall
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Such a haunting piece Sandra and it make me think about the supernatural. Your emotions are very heartfelt and it brought my emotions to the fore too. I liked the couplet rhyme you used in the 3rd last line and the last line.
So deeply emotional and expressive, made me ponder and imagine..thanks for this delicate one..10+++ A.
wow...wonderful work... I was carried and tempted to ponder and wants to imagine images on the wall too...smile Very touching thoughts...brilliant ideas you shared with us here.. i, simply love this....10+++++
gorgeous! one of the best impressionistic poems in PH. it remind me of Mallarme's poems!
Beautiful, touching poem. As I said in wonderful English. Exceptional poet u are! ! !
This is a truly beautiful write Sandra...memories and photgraphs....10+++
that was a very true observation sandra...when you get to see your old photo albums..it really feels like you are seeing someboby else..nice poem
the image is constant...but our perspectives keep changing, don't they?