Friday, March 27, 2009

Image Of Love *revised* Comments

Rating: 5.0

There’s an image of you
That I cannot remove
From my memories imagery
It's so serene, so beautiful
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Britney Hogue
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 April 2009

A very colorful description of love. Certainly an image that love itself might choose were it able and inclined to do so. In that sense, it may be said to be a love tribute. I thought it was written well. There were no obscure references to hinder the reader. Just a fine writing. GW62

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Pablo Cruise 06 April 2009

The passions exude in this one. Lovely, Britney.

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Godspower Oshodin 03 April 2009

wow, this young dude has to be very happy for a damsel not to erase his image to bay. Soul stirring!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 03 April 2009

A very fine poem with everlasting beautiful imagery. No doubt image of love is eternal. The whole poem is great except the last four lines which seem to me like anti climax, if removed will increase beauty of the poem. The poem deserves 10 anyway. Keep up the good work, Britney. Best Wishes Naseer

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