When i look in the mirror disgust is my only reaction
ive brought this on my self by user actions
im scared of myself, and i hate who i am
im scared what i would do if i had a knife in my hands
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Very good, I normally recommend people use less punctuations, but I think you could use a few more commas in some places. And it's caress not corress
Great stuff - this would be a wonderful rap song :)