I'm Trying To Make A Rhyme - Δεν Μπορώ Να Φτιάξω Ρίμα Comments

It could be worse, my wife said I only had one fault - breathing! !

What the poet felt very nicely penned.

This verse is...success! A terrific poem, Kostas.

Your finally rhymed and you failed all the time because you tried every time and step by step fathomed many also only this one you missed a step just to rectify in next move and master this also and move on.

You have succeeded in making a fun rhyme.5 stars.

Well penned Lagos.. you won this time

A wonderful write! Thanks for sharing! !

The rhyme throughout in this poem makes this poem fascinating and entertaining.A well crafted write