Wednesday, August 15, 2012

Im Tired. Comments

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I'm tired.
Im tired.
Tired of the hurt and the pain.
I'm tired of you people not treating me the same.
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Desiree Winters
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James Wade 23 August 2012

Desiree, , , , (Tears, ,) I feel your pain and hurt, and have experienced much the same...This is a great poem, I dont care what Adeline says (although she is entitled to her opinion) . Poetry is like any other form of art, the appreciation and beauty of it lies in the eye and heart of the beholder. Dont let any 'nay-sayers' discourage you from writting more.

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