Tuesday, February 7, 2012

I`m Sure I Heard The Earth Cry Comments

Rating: 4.8

Upon a hilltop deep in thought
I heard the strangest sound
It echoed through the valleys
And drifted o`er the ground
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Valerie Dohren
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Stevie Taite 28 October 2012

Wipe a tear from its eye It wishes for a time gone by Before the humans made it ill And our demise the bitter pill Fantastic poem as usual Val!

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Chris Blazo 05 October 2012

A beautifully written truth! All of the hipsters and yuppies should of went green a hundred years ago. I love this! Thank you.

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This is absolutely stunning. It gave me chills as I red it. Excellent...Bravo

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G.R. Gaus 30 April 2012

Should the poets ever rule this earth and not the politicians, it will surely be a more beautiful place along with our living conditions; another nicely written piece for our suffering mother land, Valerie......

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Joseph Anderson 26 April 2012

A sad, troubling, provoking lamentation, but well done. We need to heed these reminders. Deserving a higher rating

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Ashleigh Mellon 08 April 2012

If Only MJ Were still here to read this. he's wrote a song called Earth Song. I have a poem called heal the world, another one of his songs gave me inspiration to write it. I loved it. so meaningful, so very beautiful, and well writen!

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Sharon Smith 20 February 2012

Beautifully written Valerie. Thankyou. Regards...Sharon.

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Eric Cockrell 07 February 2012

amen! excellent poem, very much the truth!

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