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to write a poem..you have to feel it inside before.. its not that a big case to penn your feelings through a words.. just try to feel it.. thx for sharing.. keep on.. hazem al..

Poem is all about an idea, who cares about the rhymne. It's what you have to say in a nice way. You have come this far ain't you! . You don't have to try so hard. Relax It's in you.

im suffering the same case now.. im totally agree withyou.. you put the words very well.. poetry has gained a soft poet like you

fantastic, well done, thanks for sharing