Saturday, February 21, 2015

I'M Sorry Sweetheart Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see her, I feel her and I touch her,
I love her but she does not exist,
She always comes to wipe my tears,
When I am unhappy with the truth,
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Seema Chowdhury 08 November 2015

A poignant and a meaningful write

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Sarmad Mirza 03 March 2015

sum ppl use sorry to resolve awll things as it was before but sum use sorry to get rid! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2015

Groovy description. Deep feeling. A heart touching poem. Many thanks sir.

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Valsa George 22 February 2015

Your sweet heart must be a ravishing beauty with stars as her eyes, pink cheeks, lips like rose petals, silky hair ..... Wow....! Very imaginative write!

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 February 2015

A beautiful poem.................10

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Rajnish Manga 21 February 2015

This is a different kind of nostalgia where the beloved is very much present but not in a conventional sense. She is around spiritually. She is doing her role along with the protagonist who openly tells: I love her but she does not exist / She always comes to wipe my tears, Very emotional. Thanks.

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