Friday, November 28, 2008

Im Sorry Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'm sorry if ive hurt you
or if I've made you cry
I'm sorry if you heard the truth
or if you heard the lie
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lonely love
COMMENTS
XXxxKimberleyxxXX .. 23 December 2008

thats a nice creative piece of work keep up the good work 10+++++++++++++++ ur lucky u have this great gift to write lovely poetry

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Jordan Phoenix 30 November 2008

great phrasing! i love the way the ending line ties it all together so well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2008

A very nice piece of work and we all have to be very sorry for our respective mistakes on this earth.Yes, life is all about learning.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Fiona Davidson 28 November 2008

This pulls at my heart..beautifully written...thank you

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Homen Thangjam 28 November 2008

Sometimes we wake up at night hearing a certain noise and keep staring at the door bell or the black cold handset......... Silence can kill. Hope your friend calls you up soon. Wishing you togertherness.

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