Saturday, November 3, 2007
Im Slowly Going Down Comments
Rating: ★4.5
i dont think it matters anymore - not to you, atleast.
i know i still care though; its all i think about; you are all i breathe.
but like suffocation... you, my breath, are no longer inside of me.
i try to fill my lungs with life, with you, but i take in lonelinesss and pain instead.
...
Read full text
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/27/2025 11:29:53 PM # 1.0.0
You have done well with this piece. Great writing skills is shown. Imagery was great. I like the way you mention him as your breath(and this breath is no longer inside of you) From start to finish you have your readers attention. Keep writing!