Thursday, May 20, 2021

I'm Out Of Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

(In the light of humanity- Oh,
I'm out of breath, I feel suffocated
I cannot breathe, though no Cov-19 infects me
Yes, truly I cannot breathe now
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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M Asim Nehal 22 May 2021

I don't know what triggered this conflict, I know every human heart will cry for justice and will plea for peace. Forget everything but don't forget you are a poet who can bring such issues to the attention of masses. Beyond stars.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2021

A very nice poem! Well penned....5 stars

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 May 2021

All words you said here, you wrote here truth and nothing but THE TRUTH. God Blesses You Great

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 May 2021

This is very ecellent poem, Mahtab, you summed uop all miseries here, all guns and bullits here, indeed they ARE our sisters, our brothers, this is killing the own people. You composed a greatest poem,5 Stars Full!

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A heart rending poem and a picture that goes with it. Top stars Mahtab.. Stay safe.

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Dear Mahatab, Forget everything but remember that you have a strong and sweet soul within.

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This is how we all are feeling in this present pandemic. At this point, we have to strive hard to remain sane and positive to survive.

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