Friday, September 14, 2007
Im Lying So You Won'T Hurt Comments
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I said im okay
When really I am not
I cry every day and night
Cos heartache put me on the spot
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7/22/2025 5:44:57 PM # 1.0.0
You have to fix the grammar. There are some verses that need to be more worked on, too. Still, I liked your poem. The way you started and ended it talking about how you say your grief is a cold was nice. Don't worry, though: you'll soon get over the heartache. That's what everybody does, it's natural, ;)