Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Im Living My Life Comments

Rating: 4.5

Part of my life is tatoo's, penetentry rules
When running yo mouth only seperates the men from the fools

Part of my life is bullets, guns, blood, sweat and tears
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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes
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Dorothy- A. Holmes 14 July 2007

I love this poem! I love the truth spilling from all of it! 10 from me. Dorothy

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DaLovely One 03 April 2007

I'm really enjoying your poems. This is really interesting the way it's worded..

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Charley60 K 29 December 2006

Very interesting write.....well said..

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Kelly Hanson 08 December 2006

wonderful - your best yet! there are still a couple of sticky spots though. make it shine, daniel. you have a real talent

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