I'm Intellectual Ghost? Comments

Thanks for the comment on my June showcase of PH poems. : ) bri

'your mind will repeats, ' I suggest 'your mind will repeat' or '...minds will repeat' and...'will leaves you' change to 'will leave you'. Ain't/isn't English FUN! ! ? bri

'how to scare and fright, ' I don't think 'fright' is ever used as a verb. The verb would be 'frighten'. To keep the fright/sight rhyme, I'd use 'cause fright'. ;)

Jiddan Jameela. Perfect poem.

Last line is very true dear poet.But I enjoyed this new ghost.

Enjoyed the humour. Nice

An intellectual ghost! Excellent poem.

Self proclaimed? Don't beat your ghost drums of intellect. I am getting scared of you. Thoughtful poems with enough shocks.

I like intellect ghost specially when to write such poems, you are one of them to bring the darker side of humans. Full ****

Great satire using self in the poem. I liked the flow and the tone.

Subject is very interesting, I like the Ghost's stories. Not seen one but can imagine.