Friday, September 25, 2015

I'm In The Middle East Comments

Rating: 4.5

Things fell apart
Time had run off
And the wall of humanity broken down
The soldiers have tied their saddles
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Dhiren Doley
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Bakuli Bhakali 06 November 2015

a classy beginning touching middle and of course the end reaching one's heart! ! !

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thanks a lot bhakali.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 30 September 2015

Verily, a heart touching poem, Let not that time come when we totally forget that we are humans.

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thank you, friend.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 September 2015

Painful and heart touching expression about homeless people at the time of furious war. Beautiful poem....10

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Dhiren Doley 11 December 2015

Thanks a lot.

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Sanjukta Nag 25 September 2015

Very heartfelt poem.. expressing the grief of the homeless people during wars.

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Vishal Wadhwa 25 September 2015

I see a lot of pain in your words, may be because you witnessed something that has left an impact...a lasting one..

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