Friday, April 15, 2011

Im In Love And War Comments

Rating: 4.3

Im in love with a man
who make me sooo happy
he always keep a smile on my face
When we together I feel like im in heaven
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Jovahn Davis
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Minnie Gehrig 22 April 2011

Veary good, you should try to cut out the Filler words, (and, the but) Im preety bad with that to, n get to the emotion of the poem, Please see study such poets as emily dickenson, Erica Jong, Margret Atwood, Sylvia Plath, but realy your poetry is quiet good!

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Claudia Krizay 19 April 2011

I LOVE this poem- it touched my heart and my spirit deeply- good work-

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Demetris Smith 19 April 2011

Youur Really Good At Whatt Youu Do I Lovee Thiss Poem.! (:

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Jovahn Davis

Jovahn Davis

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