Monday, October 8, 2012

Im Falling Hard Comments

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When you touch me I can't breathe
When you look in my eyes I feel secure
When you're gone I cant stop thinking about you
When we talk it's like you know me
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Stephanie Wright
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Jahan Zeb 07 March 2013

Hmmmmmmmmmm. Very strong. full of feelings and carry lot more then what is in the lines. I love the concluding line. Suggests something from deep inside.

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Ency Bearis 10 October 2012

great desire with such compassion written well poetically

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 October 2012

heart longs to belong silence when talks to eyes.quite passionate write

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