Friday, July 29, 2022

I'm A Five-Years-Old Now.... [ Title And First Two Lines, About Bri Edwards, Me, Were Supplied By My Wife ] Comments

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I act like '5'; my wife says so.
I want everybody else to be wrong so I feel good.
The title and first two lines, my wife suggested.
The 'I' is me; I believe SHE should be arrested!
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Bri Edwards
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2022

A very interesting and entertaining poem with a unique theme.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 August 2022

I think we are not in a position to say who is right. Spouses ' affair is too complicated. It would be better if you write a poem about those things you have said to her too.

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Kim is right. You are making progress. No longer a baby. But growing up with a big ego. Your wife is absolutely right........ : )

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Bri Edwards 30 July 2022

my wife USED TO CALL ME a 3-year old. Yes, I AM making progress. After all, I'm in my 'second childhood'. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 29 July 2022

You're making real progress, my friend. No longer acting like a four-year-old! : ) : ) : )

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Bri Edwards 29 July 2022

Be the SECOND one to comment on this poem. ;) bri

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