Thursday, August 20, 2015

Ilumination Comments

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If you don't feel it,
It won't start,
Like with a motor,
In the dark,
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Sandra Feldman
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Chuy Amante 22 August 2015

A creative spark that's what you are now all that's needed is gas to start the car

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2015

I like that you are willing to change lines in order to achieve a more concise meaning, closer to your intent. Creativity would fall apart (If not vanish completely) without the mystery of inspiration.

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2015

I think you are right. I believe it is there for almost everybody but they don't recognize and or feel it.

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