Illusions Speak Comments

Metaphor gallery and galore …wonderful reading pleasure Sir 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Illusions that indicate a complete feeling of emptiness.....Great write Joe...10

Wonderful wonderful illusions. Wonderful perception of emptiness. Thanks for your comment on my Swedish Immigrant. Karin Anderson

whoa.......this is the best thing i have read today......well penned sir

Empty Bottle of Lost Dreams, magnificent! ! Bonnie

The most powerful line 'Empty bottle of lost DREAMS. Seems we all have an bottle sitting on the shelf, cap off, bottle spilled, contents gone. Good poem

illusions that speak nice...10

What a beautiful poem love the way you put the words together.

I love a poem that spills from the heart! I love it! 10! Dorothy I believe it should be set to music!

introspection of a unique kind, well versed, llusions of reality well done

enjoyed reading this...i see things that are not there but seemed to be there and never there..but your words paint the picture how things could be if they were real..excellent write..

One of my earlier catch phrases was 'In essence dreams are real'.It really applies to this poem.Good strong composition.

In an original way and witty … poetic 'modification' …!

Oh very nicely done.... What good are arms outstretched but cannot feel..? ! ? I loved this piece.. May the illusions speak louder than words.. Wendy

We can add on like this An ocean without water. A man without brain. A woman without heart. A food without taste. All these illusions are like eyes without visions. I like this poem very much.

Isn't it interesting where our minds can take us?

makes me believe in a sad twisted future... beautifully written, almost lyrical

Brilliant and prophetic, almost chilling, commentary on modern life. Disturbing, but socially relevant and uncannily perceptive.

An inner world will immerge from dream valley, transparent thoughts and liquid words. a beautifull poem, more real than not.

An inner world will immerge from dream valley, transparent thoughts and liquids words. a beautifull poem, more real than not.