Monday, March 2, 2009

Illusions Of Tender Moments Comments

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Tender moments that stemmed from a kiss
Though uncertain of the future all this may bring
I allowed myself to give you all the love that my heart can muster
And devotion that is felt from the deepest recessess of my soul.
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June FeirCruz
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Les Derbyshire 23 April 2009

I am drawn into this poem, becoming as vulnerable as the writer, only to suffer the same fate. You have the power to generate empathy; anyone reading this with openness and sensitivity cannot fail to be affected.

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Yelena M. 08 April 2009

'There is nothing to chisel from your marble of a heart' - these are my favourite lines. A very sincere and touching poem. Love the title. Thanks for sharing, June. A.

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