Friday, November 25, 2016

Illusions In Love Comments

Rating: 2.5

Throughout my life I remained in love,
my heart used my eyes as two brushes,
one in the right hand and the other in left,
my right hand painted bitter facts of life
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M Asim Nehal 26 December 2018

A crafty poem with great imagery and free flow. I agree with the comments written by fellow poets. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece Janab....

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Mithilesh Yadav 29 November 2016

Great babajaaan........ Aapki kavita murdey mein jaan dalney wali hai........... Bhaut pyari kavita.... Aapsey bhaut kuch hai aabhi sikhaney ko.... Aapni safedi kuch chadha dey meri jawani mein..... Ki safar tej hai bhaut aur mujhey tajurba kaam hai...

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Rajnish Manga 26 November 2016

Wonderful imagery and a narrative spread on an extensive canvas of life. But that all kinds of battle cry, violence and chaos end up in an all inclusive wave of hope and optimism, comes as a big relief to the grieving humanity. Thank for sharing a thought provoking poem.

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