Illusions Comments
Morning sun shoots an arrow
purloined from Cupid's quiver,
through the mellow heart
of the sky, blue and serene.
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My response was too long, so that is GONE. I wil try my second response next time, no illusion, but my promise and reality
I 'lost' the password to this poetic gate, Unnikrishnan and especially on my POD Day, I refound that again, True God's Wonder, I have no other words
This old ex student and graduate of Literture has One Most Important Lesson Learned Today! TOP Marks for you Unnikrishnan! Not too old to learn and to add some most important item in my brains / upper attic. TFS
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That's you at your best. Kudos! A poem woven with sterling imagery and realistic perspective. Simply brilliant! Full marks!
Thank you, Nosheen. Your words of appreciation are dear to me. Thank you.
Thank you Anjandev. Your words of appreciation boost my confidence…
Brilliant poem, time is also an illusion, perhaps even the universe is a hologram. I believe mathematically even gravity can be made to disappear.
Jagadguru Aadishankara said, "Brahma satya jagat mithya, jivo brahmaiva naparah". The only truth is Brahman, the Ultimate Reality. The universe is a mithya, an illusion. Science has proved the theory of Adwaita time and again..
Limitation of 300 words is not good by PH, how many time we write and the message is gone due to this limitation.
Very true. I have taken up the matter with the PoemHunter Administration many times in past. But they have done nothing to solve the issue. Hope that they will, now that you too have joined me in raising the issue
Our existence is enveloped in illusions, as our perception is limited and our eyes deceive us. Consequently, we deem these illusions as reality, unaware of the actuality. The veracity behind these illusions remains a mystery, and we strive to unravel it with our conjectures and logic.
For me this poem is one of the best and most profound, I have ever read and that was ever written! Sincerest admiration and congratulations. And I celebrate your talent and your genuine poetic human intuition
Sandra, I am so happy that this simple write interested you. Thank you
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7/28/2025 11:05:20 PM # 1.0.0
A wonderful poem on illusion. Extremely well penned dear poet. Top score