Monday, December 15, 2008

Illusions Comments

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Lingering regrets, memories on the
verge of obscurity, only to be brought
back to light in the presence of you
standing there. Fear, and shame
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David Blake
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Anita Atina 16 December 2008

Your poem captures lingering memories, when the past comes alive in a single snapshot of hurt, so very well David.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 December 2008

This is something like my 'die another death' which runs at a slow pace.This is differently Very good. Tightly knit wording and fast moving exprssion...........enjoyed reading it.

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