Friday, July 20, 2007

Illusions Comments

Rating: 4.5

Is it all real or just a dream
where nothing is as it really seems.
I wonder, I wonder, what does it mean.
What is our purpose on this place called
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Barbara Stahly
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With such a finishing in your poem you should retitle it as: 'Dissolving of illusions' since in the end you have the sure and safe answer in your hands. I like those short poems telling a whole philosophy to the end in few lines, well designed with a direction and sun light in the middle of the night. Well done.I give a 9+. Go ahead Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Barbara Stahly

Barbara Stahly

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