Thursday, May 18, 2023

Illusion All Around Comments

Rating: 3.0

The vague moon rays
Does not belong to moon
it comes from a ball of blaze.
All it is just fake.
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Aashitaa N Khattar
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Diana Kojira 18 May 2023

I really like this poem, it is very interesting and I feel so touch. I also see you use the alitteration technique with the words 'ball' and 'blaze'.

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Diana Kojira 18 May 2023

I really like this poem, it is very interested, I feel so touch. I also see it have the alliteration technique, with the words 'ball' and 'blaze'

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