Thursday, June 15, 2006
Illusion Comments
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Soft evening breeze caressing my face,
Your hands in mine,
They seem so real these days.
Your touch is more than I can handle,
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7/22/2025 7:30:21 PM # 1.0.0
I find 'Illusion' a great piece! The last two lines are so shattering in their effect for the new meaning they bring to the poem. I see them as changing and uplifting the earlier descriptions... I am a little confused about the functions of lines 10,11,12 though... maybe you should revisit those lines. Now I go offline with the last three lines in my mind.Thanks, Zarina!