Friday, March 26, 2010

Illusion Comments

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Born into this world
of love and care,
and joy and laughter,
as i thought!
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s yadu krishnan
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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2017

God was wrong! The Earth is a prison. Life's a mere sentence! and love is nothing but solace. and yur final prayer.. dont let the solace die...... disappointments, your expectations. sense of loss, , , , , , , worries. sorrow....... all are pictured well in this poem.... life as an illusion... but at the end you want solace and thre is a shimmer of hope........ thank you my dear poet for this poem. tony

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Indira Babbellapati 08 April 2010

you are amazing, young man! but this is the stage in life when you should be bubbling with cheer...

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