Sunday, February 7, 2010

Illusion Comments

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Your far away, but somehow you feel near
Now and there im in love with you would come creeping in my ear
I thought I saw you, it mustve been confusion, because it was just an illusion
I knew I thought I saw a smile a yard away, but it was just a bright display
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jasmine dugas
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2019

I thought i saw you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subodh Pandey 07 June 2012

Revealing in illusion. Thought provoking. A nice write

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Jose Delosantos 19 February 2010

Damn Girl You Write It With Heart Amazing Piece..

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Amy Marie 07 February 2010

I like the last line ;)

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