Tuesday, April 2, 2024

Illusion Comments

Rating: 3.7

I came without anything,
I will leave with nothing.

Whatever we see is generally an illusion,
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Bipin Churchung Rabha 28 April 2024

Absolutely. It's a philosophical one.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2024

My note here is, after the prose follows the haiku, but that I cannot see here. My conclusion is that this poem is not a haibun. Thank you for your attention.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 April 2024

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen by PoemHunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day! 5 Stars full. I have enjoyed this fascinating poem TFS

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