Tuesday, August 30, 2016

Illusion Comments

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Here flies the dust, condensed darkness here,
Whose shadow comes up home from the ancient pond

Her face lowered, eyes wet with tears, hands trembling
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Rahman Henry
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

Wow metaphorical and figurative. The phrasing is very impressive. Kudos. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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Rahman Henry

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Natore, Bangladesh.
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