Thursday, July 16, 2015

Illusion Comments

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Very strange and unexplorable
is this illusion in our mind.
It is like a glittering pearl
in our darkness inside.
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Amitava Sur
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Chuy Amante 26 July 2015

yeah, it does but at least it is not eternal... and the wheels goes round and round

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Roseann Shawiak 23 July 2015

Life catches us unawares, throwing us into a tailspin, nothing seems to be what it is. Is there a reality, or is it the illusion of reality? Just when we think we understand, we find that we don't know anything, and are being thrown into an abyss of darkness unable to find our way. Awesome poem, perfectly stated in your poetical style, a unique and original work of art! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Valsa George 23 July 2015

We are often caught in the web of illusion! Like the mirage of the desert, it may seem real! But when we try to hold it, it eludes us! In the end, it throws us into a bottomless abyss! Lovely diction with a lovelier picture! I wonder if one can ever get a better image to show the dazziling and elusive nature of illusion! Thanks Amitava!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 July 2015

Truly, illusion is like a glittering pearl in our darkness inside and deceives us in the end.Lovely phraseology, loved reading the poem.

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