Saturday, July 19, 2014

Illusion Comments

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Sky is a horizon
A hallucination that pervert
A vestibule that mirage
Arrival that fumigate
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Akhtar Jawad 10 January 2015

All our five senses feel illusions, when we step in the nucleus and the senses become dormant the sixth sense is awaken and then it is realized I am in Him and He is in me and the rest is nothing but an illusion, but let us enjoy these illusions as illusions are beautiful like rainbows.......................10

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Heather Wilkins 21 July 2014

your last stanza is a perfect ending and oh so true enjoyed the read

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The most important line of the poem I felt is shade will fade as rays are powerful Surely the fact is like that. Well done and beautiful ideas.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 July 2014

Beautiful Illusion you have made. I loved the beautiful lines.... Goodness that path all the transforms Evil that fades in its rays Sometimes sin shade it at an instant Yet rays will emerge after awhile Shade will fade as rays are powerful! ! ! ....Very true said, illusion will fade away and reality will shine..Loved reading each lines. Beautiful flow of words and rhythms..

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