Monday, November 11, 2013

Illision Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a market
As this world
Of slave traders
Barely they can sell
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sallam yassin
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

realm of thought fancied, selfishness that leads unto destruction No; pleasure with whores Not making any your thirst pass But some then mourn illusion kiss Where; every hope then in dust.....beautifully wreathed the words a message garland unto the humankind and minds

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Poetheart Morgan 12 November 2013

Everyone wants to save the souls of others but forget their own. They are in black Poet

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 11 November 2013

Very nice sallam vhai...it touched me.. beautiful poem with a great message...

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