Illicit Water Comments

Absolutely brilliant a fantastic piece of writing, please do comment/ review/ write your thoughts on my site :)

I like the comparisons made in the poem..life and death are each others shadow.

A thoughtful poem on illicit water causing deaths.

Our thirst we create. I like this especially this era of the deadly brew which is sweeping our youth. Nice poem Dedan

Something tells me this is about illicit brews and the agony that comes with it up pon society.... Good poem

nice work dedan keep up the pace

many have died due to this water. nice work. keep up the pace dedan

Now illicit Water Death _especially now that were Quenching the soil with it, It's creative to write this. I liked the symbolic language, metaphor here and there. nice.