Illicit Love Comments

Factual and realistic poem. Though forbidden, illicit love soothes a broken soul! A 10.

Once again, I am speechless. I agree with Mae..wish I would have thought of it. Recently went through this situation. But I know it was love...right feelings...wrong time. It happens. Sad as it seems...is reality and move on. Another awesome writing. You're my favorite..I will keep reading. Take care. Princess: -)

illicit love is forbidden love or it should be cos it hurts so bad..but if its not real or true it wouldnt hurt would it? ..i thought it was beautiful...wish i had written it..i could have..it tells my story...

Illicit love is the most painful. but it is still LOVE. Wherever and however it comes. We can't deny it can we David? And we shouldn't. We can't help who we fall in love with. We are not machines after all. I like your work. I'd like to see something with a bit more 'flesh' if you know what I mean. And rhyming just doesn't matter to me. Keep loving. Keep writing. Angela

Excellent end-rhymes... Good work David!