Friday, May 13, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

I cleaned until the windows sparkled,
now everyone can see
how blue the ocean is at Crystal Cove.
I made sure the jardinero cut
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Leo Victor Briones
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 May 2011

Great poem. Remarkable imagery with plenty of wisdom. Wonderfully written. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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