Friday, September 18, 2020

Ill Wind And Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sometimes ill wind blows my way, it seems
To cast opaque shadows o'er all my dreams
Sending my spirits downward soaring
Causes my life to lose its fragile mooring
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L MILTON HANKINS
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bri edwards 18 February 2021

Milt, in an unexpected way i've found i can send a message to you here, hoping you are well and that you see this note. I'm still kickin' and would like to kick PH in its !

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Bri Edwards 22 October 2020

I esp. enjoyed these words: " ...........here in the depths My soul despite its dreary drift is not bereft Of hope that I shall rise and soar And know the ecstasy of living once more." good luck! Lift your spirits with Kentucky moonshine. A jug or two and you'll soon be fine....or dead! to MyPoemList bri :)

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Pamela Lutwyche 28 September 2020

The ill wind of life, you put it very well. I think everyone knows that feeling.5 *

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 September 2020

A well expressed, meaningful poem, with a pleasing rhyme. Wonderfully well done.

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Michael Walker 20 September 2020

I have had to contend with many ill winds blowing in my life. Eventually, though not always, the wind dies down. The pairs of rhymes fit the poem's theme well.

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Ellen Ni Bheachain 19 September 2020

very melancholy yet, flowed well.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2020

A well executed poem. Simply outstanding......10++

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